| Posted by: Buddy Acker | 09-18-2009 20:59 [Email,Website] |
This is the best story based on The Legend of Zelda that I have ever read. You got in everything that I wanted. You even paid close enough attention to detail to include the fact that the Gerudos don't like men because of Ganondorf's actions. The dialogue and characters are both believable and the plot is great. If you are a Zelda fan, YOU MUST READ THIS STORY!
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| Posted by: Majora Child | 05-08-2009 18:37 [Email,Website] |
OMG! That was so good!!!!!!
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| Posted by: Helen | 04-04-2009 11:24 [Email,Website] |
i enjoyed reading this story, i love the way your mind works when it comes to writing about link, the gerudo's and zelda as well as the other characters. to me the description you gave made them come to life, well done!!!!!
*it was very good but there were parts within the story/speech itself that let you down but you overcame that by drawing the reader's attention in becasue you included a romantic theme which helped the story to be believable.
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| Posted by: Helen | 04-04-2009 11:18 [Email,Website] |
i think the story was well thought through, i felt at parts the writing or speech let you down but other than that it was good. the description you put in also helped you to keep my interest but also helped to make me as well as others believe that link and zelda and the gerudo's were real people, well done!
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| Posted by: SLL | 03-14-2009 06:17 [Email,Website] |
That was awsome!!! Please write another! I love reading your stories!
(My favorite part was the scientest saved Link)
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| Posted by: cavies | 02-28-2009 23:07 [Email,Website] |
BEST story ever!!!!!You have to write more like this one. It was the best i have read so far!
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| Posted by: Jason | 11-21-2008 18:39 [Email,Website] |
THAT WAS AWESOME! I figured the creator of the site must have a fanfic but I never found it till now, best one I've read on the site so far.
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| Posted by: Helias | 11-13-2008 21:09 [Email,Website] |
I loved the story!! It's amazing! I just started to read it because of the descripcion "Link and Zelda sneak off to spend a night alone together" xD But the story was amazing I couldn't stop reading it! :D
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| Posted by: Erica | 11-01-2008 13:30 [Email,Website] |
i luv this story!!!
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| Posted by: GAARA'S #1 FANGIRL | 09-13-2008 15:19 [Email,Website] |
OH YEAH!! This is one awesome fic!! You worked it!! OH YEAH!! This fic is great, it's cool! You worked it!!
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| Posted by: Heidi | 08-02-2008 09:11 [Email,Website] |
wow this was really really good if you write any more I would love to read them!
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| Posted by: The Nerd | 05-24-2008 01:38 [Email,Website] |
very good, and some parts really cracked me up if you write any more i would really enjoy reading them. nice job on describing situations, and the way that the characters looked like i felt like i was there beside Link
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| Posted by: superchu234 | 05-12-2008 21:18 [Email,Website] |
WOW. I thought Link might not have survived and that Impa would have to use her Sheikah skills to bust in and rescue her. Turns out Link was back for the fun.=D YOU ROCK!!!
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| Posted by: link Boy | 04-11-2008 08:01 [Email,Website] |
this was asome!!!!! and your athoer was to PLS mack more. Your the only story writer that can mack disent storers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: SunsetSovereign | 01-06-2008 16:39 [Email,Website] |
WOW!!! I loved it! Great story! My applause goes to you Lysia!
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| Posted by: Zelda fan | 12-26-2007 14:21 [Email,Website] |
it was really good write a sequel!!!
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| Posted by: jkho | 12-19-2007 13:36 [Email,Website] |
Great story, very heroic and romantic. It is a lot of detail which is good you could really get a picture of everything.
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| Posted by: PyroLink | 10-01-2007 15:48 [Email,Website] |
Great story both of them. This one was spectacular. I kinda liked the other one better though. This one was great anywasy! =)
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| Posted by: go zelda | 08-08-2007 17:55 [Email,Website] |
sequel!!!! please write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: Amelia | 07-12-2007 17:32 [Email,Website] |
That was a great story. Very funny in parts. I loved it. I'd read it again but it's really long and I don't have time right this second. Two thumbs up! Keep it up. Will you please write a sequel to this? I think it would be cool to know what happens next because it's a very catchy story.
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| Posted by: Ganon+Tiny Tim are Friends | 07-11-2007 11:18 [Email,Website] |
Wow! This story amazes me. I love the idea of a femlae warrior taking Ganondorf's place, instead of the peaceful Nabooru. I must say that the lack of more than a mention of Ganondorf made me a little unhappy, but the story is just excellent. Now Herbert Khaury and Ganondorf can be best friends forever!
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| Posted by: Ganon=Tiny Tim are Friends | 07-11-2007 11:15 [Email,Website] |
This story was amazing, even better that FFVII fanfic I read. I love the idea of a femlae warrior taking Ganondorf's place instead of the peaceful Nabooru...though nothing's as good as Ganondorf...and Herbert Khaury, of course!
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| Posted by: tobias i love the zelda games!!!! | 07-02-2007 06:14 [Email,Website] |
its really good
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| Posted by: alex | 06-26-2007 13:35 [Email,Website] |
one of the best fan stories for the legend of zelda i have ever read.
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| Posted by: Brianna | 06-14-2007 10:56 [Email,Website] |
Very nice, Lysia! But, I just want to say that Link and Zelda do NOT belong together! I mean, she's a sage he's the hero fo time!!!! There friends, no more then that!!! (I'm calming down)
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| Posted by: Baronski | 06-13-2007 13:19 [Email,Website] |
Whoa! Where do you get your inspiration? Awesome story! I want to write that good someday!
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| Posted by: Acure | 05-08-2007 13:53 [Email,Website] |
Hey whats up again listen when was this story written like fucking 5 years ago write a sequal sorry for thw swear but it was so good write a sequal please!!
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| Posted by: Tim | 05-04-2007 15:59 [Email,Website] |
OMFG that story was amazing you have to keep on writing. the ending was funny and very ironic keep it up.
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| Posted by: Sam | 04-28-2007 15:19 [Email,Website] |
Wow! Awesome story! That was one of the best I have ever read! Keep it up!=-)
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| Posted by: Harrison | 03-09-2007 22:27 [Email,Website] |
Great story! Great ending! Keep it up!
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| Posted by: link | 01-28-2007 12:00 [Email,Website] |
you are an amazing writer it really brought out the charecters
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| Posted by: | 01-25-2007 10:15 [Email,Website] |
that was a great story and you sould write more you really have talent for this
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| Posted by: Kelsey | 01-19-2007 17:38 [Email,Website] |
Wow, that was another great story!U write the best stories, and ur a very talented writer!keep it up!^_^
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| Posted by: Kara | 01-17-2007 19:49 [Email,Website] |
This is the first story I read that didn't have Ganon in it as the bad guy. Lovely writing.
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| Posted by: Acure | 01-16-2007 14:57 [Email,Website] |
Hi, Lysia hope I spelled your name write I won't to say I have been hooked with other things like girls , Naruto and Harry Potter but I won't to say you are a truly amazing writter and I want to tel you to write a sequal TO this story! okay!!
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| Posted by: Wii Man | 01-15-2007 23:02 [Email,Website] |
That story made my evening, well what was left of it. I really like how you used actual people from the game in your story, of course I mean the the scientist and the potion lady. I also liked the idea of Link and Zelda camping out at Lake Hylia, before they were attacked of course, the little bit of romanticisism really got me hooked. I think I'll go play Ocarina of Time.
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| Posted by: fanidiot63 | 12-19-2006 19:33 [Email,Website] |
omg that was a pretty awesome story .. first one i read on this site and it was amazingly good you have got some talent but i wish link and zelda looked at each other in a more romantic way
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| Posted by: Link Pwnage | 12-10-2006 16:56 [Email,Website] |
You really are a talented writer. this story was awesome!
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| Posted by: Biggest Link fan ever | 12-09-2006 13:46 [Email,Website] |
Lysia, you are a gifted writer!
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| Posted by: Master Chief | 12-03-2006 16:40 [Email,Website] |
Awsome story!
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| Posted by: LoZFan1989 | 11-25-2006 07:48 [Email,Website] |
Another great story,Lysia! Keep up the good work!
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| Posted by: Biggest Link fan ever | 10-18-2006 18:11 [Email,Website] |
Yes, I am back again. But this time rather then telling a disturbing story I am going to express how much I like this story. Lysia, you are a tremendous writer!
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| Posted by: P_o_h | 10-09-2006 11:18 [Email,Website] |
this was awesome! really enjoyed it, but i wish you could of carried the epilouge on a bit with link and zelda having another go at camping :D
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| Posted by: Gerudo_Girl | 10-08-2006 14:04 [Email,Website] |
That was awesome cuz for one i love the gerudos and i just read your other story u are a truly talented writer!
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| Posted by: Acure | 10-03-2006 13:27 [Email,Website] |
Seriosly that wasgood but please put The shadow gerudos latest story...
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| Posted by: Acure | 10-03-2006 13:25 [Email,Website] |
L:isten this is acure The shadow Gerudo said you did nothing to the sequal of Skullkids revenge...... why?? good story though.
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| Posted by: Jose | 09-30-2006 23:56 [Email,Website] |
WEIRD!!! but cool
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| Posted by: callibur X | 08-02-2006 10:13 [Email,Website] |
um...i got confused at the end wen impa said why iszeldas dress off does that mean theymade out or somthin because in ur story u said she took off that dress wen she changed so i dont get it. Good story though.
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| Posted by: liquid soul 2 | 08-01-2006 14:56 [Email,Website] |
Yes, I know! Thats gonna be a killer! I can't wait that long!
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| Posted by: Seventh Sage | 07-30-2006 09:11 [Email,Website] |
i heard that they were almost done wit the third Pirates of the Carrabian movie...but it won't come out till next year >_<
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| Posted by: liquid soul 2 | 07-24-2006 22:12 [Email,Website] |
Hey, I saw Pirates of the Caribbean! I love Pirates.......Of the Caribbean that is. Orlando Bloom was SO hot! I went and saw that 3 times and I'm going tomarrow with some of my freinds...that will make it 4 times! Whoo-hoo! Boy I love those Pirates! Except Keira Knightly, who isn't really a pirate, but it doesnt matter. I STILL DON'T LIKE HER!
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| Posted by: Annie | 07-12-2006 18:04 [Email,Website] |
This was a great story,especially since all the scenes you used were set in places from the O of T.Cool!
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| Posted by: pancake sushi | 07-08-2006 21:59 [Email,Website] |
Right-o to laughing monkey! The first Pirates of the Carribean movie will always be the best. I didn't like the 2nd one as much as the first.
(More sword-action if you know what I mean)
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| Posted by: laughing monkey | 07-07-2006 12:11 [Email,Website] |
About what elf princess said: So not true! This was a GREAT story...but your first was the BOMB!!! First is always the best! Just like pirates of the carribean, second movie was AWSOME, but first was totally better.
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| Posted by: katosama | 07-07-2006 12:09 [Email,Website] |
Totally Wicked! I respect you....along with Dora the explorer!
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| Posted by: Sheikah | 07-07-2006 11:46 [Email,Website] |
This is one of the greatest Zelda FanFics I've erver read! And I've read a few ;)
I loved what you did with the Lakeside Scientist and adore his comment about the explosives! Keep writting!!!
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| Posted by: Seventh Sage | 07-04-2006 22:13 [Email,Website] |
That was MAD GOOD!! U should totally keep writing stories!!
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| Posted by: Megan S. | 07-01-2006 20:39 [Email,Website] |
Wow thats the best story I read in three websites!
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| Posted by: Elf Princess*** | 07-01-2006 13:35 [Email,Website] |
*winking slyly* I know im weird, but i think people will agree with me when i say that you rock at writing stories! And this one was better than your first
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| Posted by: Celeste | 06-20-2006 15:23 [Email,Website] |
I enjoyed this story very much! I like the humorous points throughout the story, especially with the Lake Laboratory's scientist. The ending made me smile!
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| Posted by: Olivia | 06-09-2006 11:56 [Email,Website] |
You're a very good author! I love both of you fanfics! This one left me on the edge of my seat! Keep it up!
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| Posted by: Acure ( I know the name sucks!!) | 06-04-2006 14:11 [Email,Website] |
Thatv was cool right up there with my other favorite story Skullkids revenge anyway keep writting
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| Posted by: Acure ( I know the name sucks!!) | 06-04-2006 14:11 [Email,Website] |
Thatv was cool right up there with my other favorite story Skullkids revenge anyway keep writting
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| Posted by: mic | 05-28-2006 03:55 [Email,Website] |
cute
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| Posted by: Bluelink greg | 05-10-2006 14:10 [Email,Website] |
good job lysia keep it up!
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| Posted by: Joshua Norton | 04-30-2006 19:53 [Email,Website] |
"I like the way it ended, keep up the good work!"
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| Posted by: Reveka Sheikah | 04-05-2006 08:26 [Email,Website] |
I really love it!
You did so well writing this story,I can hope from you another good story.
Keep writing!
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| Posted by: Lysia | 04-02-2006 06:59 [Email,Website] |
testing review
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| Posted by: Lysia | 04-02-2006 06:59 [Email,Website] |
testing review
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| Posted by: Lysia | 04-02-2006 06:59 [Email,Website] |
testing review
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| Posted by: Lysia | 04-02-2006 06:59 [Email,Website] |
testing review
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| Posted by: Laura | 03-20-2006 11:58 [Email,Website] |
I really enjoyed it, it was a great read! A good plot and link and zelda are the perfect match!
Please write another!
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| Posted by: zeldalover | 01-25-2006 23:53 [Email,Website] |
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| Posted by: | 01-24-2006 22:25 [Email,Website] |
That was a most awesome story. I enjoyed every bit.
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| Posted by: Goddess of Power | 12-11-2005 15:20 [Email,Website] |
That was one of the best stories I have ever heard. I mean it. Keep writing!
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| Posted by: | 11-20-2005 12:12 [Email,Website] |
dude, write another one NOW! I like that i'm not the only one who thinks that Zelda and Link make the best couple! :)
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| Posted by: Janine | 11-11-2005 16:55 [Email,Website] |
cool! just like your first one, write yhe next!
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| Posted by: Dinker | 10-28-2005 16:52 [Email,Website] |
Haha silly Impa! Neat plot~
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| Posted by: Dragon | 10-01-2005 15:13 [Email,Website] |
it was a good read all around. i really enjoyed it.
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| Posted by: amy (ameflame) | 09-08-2005 19:56 [Email,Website] |
molly (my sister) made fun of me 4 almost crying when i read this story.
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| Posted by: Twilight Princess | 08-16-2005 20:10 [Email,Website] |
I liked it. Nobody ever talks about the Mad Scientist or a good version of the Gerudos. Please write more!
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| Posted by: amy | 08-06-2005 13:37 [Email,Website] |
This is a good story. LINKMASTE,UR GOIN DOWN WITH A STORY IM GONNA WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: Chelsea | 08-03-2005 18:43 [Email,Website] |
man. at the begining, it started to sound really romantic. i mean i'm a person who wants to see a very romantic relationship with Link and Zelda. but no, Zelda had to be kidnapped. AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: zeldalover10 | 06-14-2005 12:32 [Email,Website] |
brilliant i enjoyed reading it, it shows that link and zelda cares alot for each other
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| Posted by: Dark Skull Kid | 04-24-2005 15:24 [Email,Website] |
Wow, Excelent but I think Zelda wanted this to be a nite to remeber if u know what I mean...
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| Posted by: Navi24 | 02-05-2005 14:55 [Email,Website] |
ummmmm..............uhhhhhhh.......good?
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| Posted by: linkmaste | 01-09-2005 17:53 [Email,Website] |
kool oningal but new i like it u can edit it a few times and ull be a kastuo author!
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| Posted by: Bobby | 12-04-2004 14:50 [Email,Website] |
I read your story again, and this time, for some strange reason, it was even better.
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| Posted by: Bobby | 12-03-2004 19:47 [Email,Website] |
I really loved it. I liked it better than your first one.
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| Posted by: Linxhot | 11-29-2004 06:13 [Email,Website] |
BADBADBADBADBADBAD..............WAAA:(
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| Posted by: Kaiko | 11-29-2004 02:02 [Email,Website] |
Nice 1! It was hilarious at the ending! LOLOLOL! Well... luv it!
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| Posted by: Oni-Zelda | 11-28-2004 18:47 [Email,Website] |
It was real cool. And.....OMG!IM LATE FOR MY FUCK'EN OCARINA CLASS!AND I HAVE TO GO GET MY HAIR PURPLE & SPIKED!!!(My hair is red,by the way)SEE YA UGLY PEOPLES!!!
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| Posted by: Dark Din | 11-28-2004 18:45 [Email,Website] |
Link wearing a dress?I LAUGHED SO HARD YOU PUT ME IN A COMA IN 3...2...1...AGH!(I know I know. Dont tell me. Im weird.)
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| Posted by: Hannah | 10-29-2004 12:18 [Email,Website] |
Wow! Your story was excellent! I akmost cried at the end! (Yeah, I know, I'm a wee bit of a weirdo) I really hope that you continue to write more stories!
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| Posted by: Dark Moogle | 10-02-2004 02:41 [Email,Website] |
I liked the fact that Link couldn't keep it in his pants/tunic during the start.LOL
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| Posted by: Bronze Wolf | 10-01-2004 22:25 [Email,Website] |
nice story you kept it well into context and there wasnt to much of a crossover well done also have you heard of
northcastle.co.uk
they got some good romance stories i recomend angels 1 and 2 by shannon (twisted link worshiper) great story give it a look anys good stuff keep it up!
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| Posted by: Venus | 09-30-2004 11:39 [Email,Website] |
In Chapter Three, I noticed a typo towards the end:
"Zelda almost felt like doing the same thing."
It should be Impa, not Zelda. Sorry! ^_^;; :::continues reading:::
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| Posted by: Link86 | 09-29-2004 10:01 [Email,Website] |
Wow that was really orginal and I enjoyed it a lot I hope to read more in the furture.
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| Posted by: Lady Juliet | 09-29-2004 01:40 [Email,Website] |
It's been a while since I enjoyed a Zelda fanfic but I really did with this one. It was really funny, I loved the Gerudo focus and plus the mad scientist getting a supporting role. Really good work!
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| Posted by: Mysterious Hylian Warrior | 09-28-2004 16:29 [Email,Website] |
That was both cute and funny. Great work!
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