| Posted by: amy | 03-27-2008 14:59 [Email,Website] |
that was a cool story but i did not understand the end |
| Posted by: Peridot | 04-04-2007 17:43 [Email,Website] |
Wow... That was great! Love the emotion! It's really believeable! You have talent! Continue these stories, please! |
| Posted by: bongo-bongo | 10-21-2006 22:05 [Email,Website] |
Wow that is the best fan fiction on this whole site. Nobody tells it from the eyes of anyone but main characters. write more PLEASE!!!!!!!! |
| Posted by: Saria's Sister | 08-27-2006 16:44 [Email,Website] |
gaaaaah!! I wanna know what happens next!!! |
| Posted by: Majora | 08-20-2006 14:59 [Email,Website] |
Guess what? You have talent! Personally, I wouldn't write about a Deku Scrub. But you're definitely killing! Write more! |
| Posted by: Fatty Matty had a hatty | 07-17-2006 13:13 [Email,Website] |
Link is not a murderer. I will personally slay you, deku scum!!! |
| Posted by: GreenKnight | 05-20-2006 13:38 [Email,Website] |
I liked it, the only time anyone ever showed the perspective of a Deku scrub was Majora's Mask. That's what I like origanallity... |
| Posted by: Knil | 05-19-2006 19:02 [Email,Website] |
Wow like your story with A Deku misgiuded as a chosen one. WoW i would Wish to see More. |
| Posted by: x | 12-26-2005 12:03 [Email,Website] |
I like it. I mean it's in frist person wich can be unique in its own was. I personaly give this story 2 tumbs up!!!!!!!! :) |
| Posted by: amy's cousin katie reynolds (the popular one) | 10-01-2005 17:43 [Email,Website] |
I think it was okay, but I think you could of shortened it up a bit. Please do not take Amy's comment personaly, its just that she can get a little.. whats the word......odd. |
| Posted by: Person | 08-14-2005 01:51 [Email,Website] |
I like, I want more. Finish it (please)! |
| Posted by: amy | 08-06-2005 20:43 [Email,Website] |
i dont like it. Sorry. |