| Posted by: Advancedgamer14 | 07-09-2008 00:16 [Email,Website] |
sequel can be found here
http://advancedgamer14.tripod.com/id33.html
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| Posted by: AnnaMayLover | 07-02-2008 22:22 [Email,Website] |
This is a very unique story. It was really funny. There were a lot of errors though and it's totally not fair to leave your loyal readers hanging like that. I mean seriously! How do you expect us to cope with a murderer on the loose and an unavenged death? You MUST write a sequel! I really liked all the characters in this story. Especially Knil.(Eyes tear up.) Don't let him go in vain! He must be avenged!
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| Posted by: Virginia | 06-01-2008 22:07 [Email,Website] |
THAT WAS TOTALLY AMAZING!!! plz write more, don't forget about your dedicated fanz who feed off your creativity! we need more of ur stories! however, at the beggining you put like the ast paragraph of the previous chapter at the beggining of the next chapter, and then you quit doing that. also i thing you spelled Zak 'Zach' once :)vanyway, nice story!
note to self-
never read the reviews before the story, SPOILERS!!!!!
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| Posted by: Paul Studios | 04-29-2008 07:25 [Email,Website] |
HAY THAT WAS ASOME!!!! can I make it in to a movie
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| Posted by: krystal | 04-23-2008 13:36 [Email,Website] |
omg this was an awesome story!!!!! What happens next?! PLEASE write a sequal!
i cried when Knil died! He was soooooo awesome! You're so mean for killing him!
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| Posted by: link 2.o | 04-09-2008 11:32 [Email,Website] |
that was awsome u should do another one to make like a saga but it was freaken awsome!!!
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| Posted by: | 02-23-2008 06:43 [Email,Website] |
majora isnt even a character there is just a mask called majora's mask skull kid was the one who wore it
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| Posted by: prinsess zeldaness | 11-17-2007 18:08 [Email,Website] |
OMG!!! THAT DUDE SHOULD TOTALY BE AN WRITER 4 REALS!!!
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| Posted by: Keith | 09-10-2007 00:30 [Email,Website] |
This is probably the best fanfiction story I have ever read.
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| Posted by: Olli | 07-26-2007 18:01 [Email,Website] |
I realy like this story. It´s great!
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| Posted by: Suri The half sheikah | 06-21-2007 09:15 [Email,Website] |
Waa cool story! ^^ but you killed knil, not fair!
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| Posted by: Brianna | 06-14-2007 11:02 [Email,Website] |
You did really good at writing this story!
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| Posted by: Andrew | 06-07-2007 13:59 [Email,Website] |
The story was fabulous, the commentary was hilarious, the plot very well thought out,what's not to dig about this story?Also I liked the humor put in there. My favorite scene is the one where Knil shouts at the Shadow Wizard guy.LOLS!
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| Posted by: Brianna | 05-01-2007 19:51 [Email,Website] |
That story rocked!!!!
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| Posted by: links soul | 04-10-2007 20:54 [Email,Website] |
your story brings light to the characters
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| Posted by: Peridot | 04-05-2007 16:37 [Email,Website] |
It was alright... Great writing style!
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| Posted by: Flash | 02-13-2007 19:18 [Email,Website] |
I LOVE your story. Great characters, great plot, great exicution of the story. Is it ok if I write a sequal on what I think happened next? I will only do it with your permission. If you want I can E-Mail you the scipt to review. Please respond.
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| Posted by: Z_freak93 | 02-13-2007 18:06 [Email,Website] |
!!!!!!
Where's the rest!? What happens next?!!! That story was so awesome, nut where's the rest of it?!!!
*meep*
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| Posted by: Tom | 02-05-2007 17:51 [Email,Website] |
dude, nice where'd you get Zak and alok from?
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| Posted by: link | 01-28-2007 19:17 [Email,Website] |
you are a truly gifted writer i almost cried that was the best link story i ever read
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| Posted by: sitting on fattness | 10-27-2006 17:36 [Email,Website] |
what the hell is that??? who ever wrote this shuld go play in traffic, that is to good writing as Anjulea Jolea is to wholesome morality.
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| Posted by: LilGemsy | 10-23-2006 12:57 [Email,Website] |
OMG that was a great story,I cried when Knil died cause I really liked him.But I liked Zak 2 I can't belive he did that.
Still it was a great story
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| Posted by: liquid soul 2 | 08-06-2006 01:23 [Email,Website] |
shut up.
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| Posted by: cooldude | 08-05-2006 21:50 [Email,Website] |
ok, the story was nice, but the stupid crap liquid soulwrote there is just plain mean to the author. this is where you can tell what you think of the story, not where you can write about ur love of pirates. sorry, but i just had to say that, anyways nice storie, keep writing.
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| Posted by: liquid soul 2 | 07-27-2006 10:27 [Email,Website] |
Aw crap! It turned out all....Stupid! Just forget all those letters! They're SUPPOSED to say "I love pirate" in BIG letters! but it got screwed up so....forget about it!
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| Posted by: liquid soul 2 | 07-27-2006 10:13 [Email,Website] |
Pirates rock my sox off!
iiiiiiii
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ii ooo ooo
iiiiiiii ooooooooo
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ppppp ii rrrrr aa tttttt eeeeee
pp pp ii rr rr aa aa tt ee
ppppp ii rrrrr aaaaaa tt eeeeee
pp ii rr rr aa aa tt ee
pp ii rr rr aa aa tt eeeeee
I know it's a bit disoriented, but It's alot harder than you think! And I would have wrote "Pirates" instead of "Pirate" but I didn't have enough room...and that would have gotten messy! Any way! Go see that movie! It's awsome!Good....err...story...I guess.
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| Posted by: #4 | 07-09-2006 22:10 [Email,Website] |
WEEPEE
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| Posted by: Zero One | 07-06-2006 10:26 [Email,Website] |
I loved the story but I think it should have continued further intothose ten years.
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| Posted by: Elf Princess*** | 06-29-2006 19:01 [Email,Website] |
DANG that was a good DANG story. DANG you put a spell on me so I cannot stop talking to my friends about your story. I'm going to say this only once: WRITE MORE STORIES!!!! P.S. in the sequel make Ciel and LInk fall in love Hee-hee, kidding! :)
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| Posted by: advancedgamer14 | 06-03-2006 21:12 [Email,Website] |
yes, but i think we should stop communicating like this. this place is for reveiws, its not a message board and i apologize for using it like one. if ya wanna talk send me an e-mail
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| Posted by: Me | 06-03-2006 15:04 [Email,Website] |
Also what did u mean by the homo sexuals? Were u refering 2 the twin jugglers from MM that u see red shirt laughing at blue shirt?
srry 4 tripple post in like 10 minuets
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| Posted by: Me | 06-03-2006 15:03 [Email,Website] |
nevermind
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| Posted by: Me | 06-03-2006 15:00 [Email,Website] |
cool, either that, or it turns out to be entirly an act and surprise link in the end.
First one's better though
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| Posted by: advancedgamer14 | 06-03-2006 13:24 [Email,Website] |
thats not a bad idea, but the story is over. i have another two stories to write before link and zak face off. but thanks, i liked the idea.
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| Posted by: Me | 06-03-2006 13:16 [Email,Website] |
BUMP
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| Posted by: Me | 06-02-2006 15:02 [Email,Website] |
Woah thanks I have an Idea for the next chapter. Mabey Zac becomes really Powerful and the only way to kill him would be to revive Ganon 'cause he's the only one powerful enough.
just a suggestion though
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| Posted by: advancedgamer14 | 06-01-2006 20:02 [Email,Website] |
zak is the big bad guy here, cutting off his own arm was an act, that parasite never got into his head. and lets just say that link didn't have a fairy on him. and if i had to geuss, fairys cant bring you back after youve been dead for a while
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| Posted by: Me | 06-01-2006 08:20 [Email,Website] |
also Couldn't Link have just got a fairy & bring Knil back?
And why is this my 3rd question in 2 posts?
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| Posted by: Me | 06-01-2006 08:18 [Email,Website] |
Awsome
WAIT, was it Zac or the paracite that killed Knil
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| Posted by: Cloud44 | 05-28-2006 21:21 [Email,Website] |
one of the best fan fics i have ever read. you inspire me to write my own. keep on doing what you are doing. you have potential
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| Posted by: nicki | 05-26-2006 14:07 [Email,Website] |
i like to comment you:p.. but your storywas good. I think elf princess*** loves you tho
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| Posted by: advancedgamer14 | 05-21-2006 13:40 [Email,Website] |
hey, i do have a sequal in the works, can't let the bad guy get away can i? you can read the first part here.
http://advancedgamer14.tripod.com/
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| Posted by: Reveka Sheikah | 05-17-2006 21:14 [Email,Website] |
Great Great!
I'm waiting another goo fan fic like that. Keep writing!
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| Posted by: Blue Aztec | 05-17-2006 21:13 [Email,Website] |
That was a really good story, if you can write some more It'll be cool
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| Posted by: link to the legends | 05-13-2006 16:14 [Email,Website] |
I cant wait till the next one comes.
Will there be a sequal?
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| Posted by: Elf Princess*** | 05-12-2006 21:05 [Email,Website] |
Wow. It must have taken you forever to write that! you are a motivated writer! I loved the story, but try to have a little more romance next time. Still, YOU ROCK!!
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| Posted by: | 04-13-2006 10:14 [Email,Website] |
i enjoyed that very much
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| Posted by: spider-man | 03-11-2006 18:41 [Email,Website] |
THIS STORY IS SO GOOD THAT NOT ONLY AM I NOW FORCED TO SPEAK UNCOMFORTABLELY LOUD WHEN I TALK I INSTANTLY SOLIED MY SELF FROM EXCITMENT WHEN I FISNISHED
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| Posted by: spider-man | 03-11-2006 18:40 [Email,Website] |
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| Posted by: advancedgamer14 | 01-19-2006 17:46 [Email,Website] |
(i'm the guy who wrote the story)
i don't think i used the term freaks
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| Posted by: zELDaFrEEk05-06 | 01-19-2006 13:34 [Email,Website] |
wow.....umm i actually enjoy the homo-sexual freaks....but it was still good
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| Posted by: nicki S | 01-19-2006 13:32 [Email,Website] |
dont worry i actually REALY read the story before i made you look good. And it was pretty awesome
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| Posted by: | 12-28-2005 21:26 [Email,Website] |
very nice
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