| Posted by: Liz | 12-14-2009 18:28 [Email,Website] |
I CAN'T STOP READING THIS STORY! AWSOME! It's kinda sad that Link gets injured THAT badly.......*sniffle* I LOVE STORIES WHEN PEOPLE NEARLY DIE
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| Posted by: brendan | 12-10-2009 18:20 [Email,Website] |
good
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| Posted by: That Guy | 12-09-2009 19:56 [Email,Website] |
Woww...I read this agian, for about the seventh time. Litarally. It's been a few years, and still my all time favorite. Great Job. Don't listen to what the people who wished they had the writing skills like you do say. They're just jealous.
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| Posted by: War62 | 11-29-2009 16:06 [Email,Website] |
I also think that this is a great idea for a game. . . maybe you could send it in to Nintendo as an idea for the next zelda?
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| Posted by: Buddy Acker | 09-18-2009 14:27 [Email,Website] |
I'll be honest; the story was not perfect. I saw a lot of errors, the main one being commas where commas should not be. I also was slightly disappointed by the ending as I was expecting an epic showdown between Link and Ganondorf, which did not happen. Nevertheless, I got involved in the story early on and I liked it a lot. It's very entertaining and worth a read, and dare I say it, a good idea for the next video game?
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| Posted by: Wolf Link | 09-03-2009 14:30 [Email,Website] |
again awsome...............
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| Posted by: Triforce Girl | 03-13-2009 18:57 [Email,Website] |
I thought this story was AWSOME!!!
I love to read it over and over!
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| Posted by: Triforce Girl | 03-13-2009 18:57 [Email,Website] |
I thought this story was AWSOME!!!
I love to read it over and over!
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| Posted by: linklover123 | 02-22-2009 19:46 [Email,Website] |
wow this story is great! i cant stop reading! XD 999999999/10
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| Posted by: Jared | 02-21-2009 15:33 [Email,Website] |
Very good! I really enjoyed that. Usually I read the first bit, then print the story to read later. This time, however, my eyes are hurting from staring at the computer screen! I liked how you left things open to interpretation, that is, imagination. Perhaps you could work with Nintendo and help write the next storyline? Anyway, I wish that the character Julia was elaborated on, but I understand that you were probably getting tired of writing. Also, the last chapter was too brief. Being a Ganondorf-hater, I wish that I could "see" the banishment of Ganon. Overall, great story! (8/10)
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| Posted by: Wolf Link | 01-31-2009 16:30 [Email,Website] |
Wolf Link again. I just can't stop reading this story!
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| Posted by: Midna-Twilight-Girl | 01-08-2009 22:54 [Email,Website] |
Hey out of the couple of these i have read i really like this one it's great!
i could picture alot of it pretty well but pictures would be sweet additon! ;)
99 out of 100!! :D
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| Posted by: SPG inc | 01-05-2009 13:31 [Email,Website] |
Good. But you could have got Julia a little more involved. Once we'd found out she was the Hero of Time she was side lined for the rest of the story.
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| Posted by: the only wish | 12-20-2008 17:02 [Email,Website] |
Indeed the best fanfic I've read in quite a while.
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| Posted by: Smitty | 12-11-2008 15:39 [Email,Website] |
That was really good story. I love it.
If you can create some pictures, describing some of the major scenes, that would make the story better.
Keep Writing (5 out of 5)
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| Posted by: Z | 12-07-2008 20:27 [Email,Website] |
OMG!it was the best one I've read so far!
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| Posted by: lizard | 10-16-2008 21:24 [Email,Website] |
I LOVE IT! IT THE BEST IV'E EVER HEARD! It was really funny, I had to stop reading the night I started because I had school the next morning, I almost snuck out of bed to read it!
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| Posted by: Chelsea | 10-01-2008 15:34 [Email,Website] |
This was absolutly funny and I loved the ending even though it was a bit sad. I really did enjoy reading this:)
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| Posted by: Wolf Link | 09-24-2008 16:43 [Email,Website] |
OMG!sweet!awesome!!!!!! I don't have enough woords for how great this story is.I like how you continued from orcarina but what happened to Julia? anyway it was great.
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| Posted by: Zero Suit Sheik | 09-14-2008 12:36 [Email,Website] |
Poor doggie. Oh well. It deserved it after bighting Link.But...I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! WRIGHT MORE ABOUT JULIA!!!!! SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!!! Sorry...I kinda lost my cool there...... (curdles in a ball)(my...precious....)
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| Posted by: tommyjean537 | 09-09-2008 16:41 [Email,Website] |
man this story is so good this is like my third time reading it! it never gets old!
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| Posted by: richard | 07-24-2008 22:55 [Email,Website] |
that was a really good story but left a few things unanswered like, what ever happened to julia? is the future zelda going to reclaim her throne over hyrule? a sequel would be really cool and i would enjoy reading it. This story was so cool im going to read it 2 more times. Good job on it
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| Posted by: Nicole | 07-12-2008 23:41 [Email,Website] |
That was the coolest Zelda story Ive ever read. It was AWSOME!
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| Posted by: zeldafangirl | 06-27-2008 10:45 [Email,Website] |
this story was just amzing! i hope you write a zelda book and get it published. I would so read it!
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| Posted by: Gus Gonzalez | 06-24-2008 23:29 [Email,Website] |
It was a great story, depicted in a way that makes you feel as if it is a continuing saga of the Legend. You should give this story board to make it a new video game and I think it would be awsome...thanks again
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| Posted by: A Fan | 06-12-2008 16:59 [Email,Website] |
That story was spectacular! It really made Zelda come to life! Make another!
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| Posted by: midna | 06-06-2008 13:09 [Email,Website] |
oh god. this is so funny...
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| Posted by: Nibbly | 06-05-2008 21:01 [Email,Website] |
You are an awesome writer, Lysia. I look up to you and hope to write as good a story as you can - especially since I'm a writer also!
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| Posted by: Matt Hoskin | 05-12-2008 21:37 [Email,Website] |
Hey Lysia , i just wanted to say that your story was good. Regardless of what other people say, I think you have a really good start for writing stories.
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| Posted by: superchu234 | 05-04-2008 21:26 [Email,Website] |
OMG!! That was awesome!! The ending was sad, but I think it was very awesome and that it added lots of depth to the Zelda name.=D
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| Posted by: pyro tech | 04-29-2008 03:11 [Email,Website] |
it's good, but you should have put more of a rebelion to it.
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| Posted by: ........ | 03-27-2008 08:10 [Email,Website] |
it was good :)
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| Posted by: Midna | 03-20-2008 14:53 [Email,Website] |
I like it.Not the best story I've read on here but still good.
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| Posted by: Zachary | 03-01-2008 10:12 [Email,Website] |
This was soooooo awsome!!!! please please please make a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!1
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| Posted by: | 02-27-2008 15:47 [Email,Website] |
its ok
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| Posted by: Masterevil | 01-08-2008 13:59 [Email,Website] |
this is the best legend of zelda story I ever read.
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| Posted by: Neji | 01-04-2008 12:37 [Email,Website] |
You should make a sequel.
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| Posted by: Green Hat | 01-02-2008 23:54 [Email,Website] |
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH! HOLY COW...IT'S AMAZING!
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| Posted by: Patrick Gravel | 12-22-2007 06:32 [Email,Website] |
Great story! I loved it! You are one good author.
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| Posted by: alexis cather | 12-06-2007 18:12 [Email,Website] |
It was very weird yet brillant.About the most awsome story I have read.
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| Posted by: Taylor of Rosendale | 11-13-2007 19:42 [Email,Website] |
This story had a very interesting point of view. I like it!
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| Posted by: Madrebel1 | 11-11-2007 14:18 [Email,Website] |
It is brilliant
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| Posted by: Shining Force | 10-10-2007 17:33 [Email,Website] |
Hi! My reviewer name is Shining Force.
My comments on fanfics will have something to do with Shining Force the
game. If you get damaged by points 1-8
then it's ok. If you get damaged by points 10-30, that means that it SUCKED!!!(well to me.) If you dodged the attack, that means that I LOVED IT!
This story got damaged by 2.:)
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| Posted by: hhhhhh | 10-06-2007 14:58 [Email,Website] |
ahahahaha that was a pile of shite
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| Posted by: PyroLink | 09-22-2007 15:55 [Email,Website] |
SSSSSSSSSWWWWWEEEEEETTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!
AWSOMELYSWWWEEEETTTTTTT GREAT STORY
well the best i have read.=)
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| Posted by: PyroLink | 09-22-2007 15:51 [Email,Website] |
That was the best story ever!!!!!
I love your stories..This one esspesially it was great
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| Posted by: Shirobi | 07-30-2007 21:53 [Email,Website] |
wow. really good! ending was sad, but otherwise really good!!!
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| Posted by: Link is awsome | 07-22-2007 11:46 [Email,Website] |
wow i loved it the ending was sad though...=(
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| Posted by: link | 07-20-2007 23:41 [Email,Website] |
great,except julia shouldnt have been the descendant zelda should have because it would make more sense. otherwise really cool.
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| Posted by: link of the future | 07-17-2007 15:44 [Email,Website] |
It was a great story and very exciting but why make Julia the hero of her time if she did nothing really and ended up getting arrested?
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| Posted by: Olli | 07-15-2007 09:47 [Email,Website] |
this was the best story i ever read...
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| Posted by: dekudude333 | 07-10-2007 18:20 [Email,Website] |
that was awsome!!!!! really good!!!!!do I hear a sequal coming!?!
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| Posted by: Tobias | 07-02-2007 06:18 [Email,Website] |
i dont like the modenr twist
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| Posted by: Brianna | 06-14-2007 10:50 [Email,Website] |
That was awesome!!!! I loved it when link killed the dog!!! CLASSIC. When I told my mom she was wide eyed!!! LOL.
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| Posted by: Hwwtra | 06-13-2007 16:37 [Email,Website] |
This story is awesome! I think it was very well thought out.
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| Posted by: zac/link | 06-12-2007 09:02 [Email,Website] |
How do i post a storie these one are soooooooo good
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| Posted by: Andrew | 06-07-2007 11:33 [Email,Website] |
This story is most....it's soooooooo cool I can't find a word for it! It's cool because: 1. I enjoy anything to do with time travel. 2. I Love The Ocarina of Time and its places and people. But one thing that would have created more suspense: Since Julia was a descendant, You could have had HER play the Ocarina. But anyways, ROCK ON!
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| Posted by: silverfox21088 | 06-01-2007 13:30 [Email,Website] |
This isone very good story...and I've read quite a few lol. ME NEED SEQUEL!!
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| Posted by: ishish55 | 04-26-2007 20:36 [Email,Website] |
what happened to the master sword, did he leave it in the future???
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| Posted by: ??? | 04-21-2007 22:38 [Email,Website] |
Very very very good story
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| Posted by: Retard | 04-15-2007 17:17 [Email,Website] |
i hated the story it sucked !!!!
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| Posted by: cal sullivan | 04-13-2007 09:43 [Email,Website] |
I loved this story. Its the first piece of fan fiction I've read and i am encouraged to read some more.I just have one question. How did julia end up?
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| Posted by: Armon | 04-06-2007 16:36 [Email,Website] |
cool story. wish there was a sequal......
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| Posted by: | 04-01-2007 15:58 [Email,Website] |
WTF
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| Posted by: the hero of time | 03-22-2007 18:21 [Email,Website] |
REALLY GOOD!!!!! yeah i'll say that again!
REALLY GOOD!!!!! it's the only FanFiction that i've finshed! (not that other FanFiction doesn't have a good plot!)
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| Posted by: Link99 | 03-21-2007 17:33 [Email,Website] |
I've read the hole story and it was the best! I liked the part when Link tossed a boot at Gannon's car, he he.
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| Posted by: stamp007 | 03-17-2007 12:09 [Email,Website] |
i only read the first chapter and i thout it was awsome. i cant belief that you got that kind of info to wright that you could come up with that. ill read the rest later today.
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| Posted by: stamp007 | 03-17-2007 01:04 [Email,Website] |
i only read the first chapter and i think its awsome, i just dont understand how you gat this information
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| Posted by: Flash | 03-05-2007 14:35 [Email,Website] |
Oh...My...Gosh! That was... Awsome! You rock!
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| Posted by: Jed Ullrich | 02-28-2007 15:19 [Email,Website] |
LOVE IT!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: darklink | 02-13-2007 13:22 [Email,Website] |
that was REALLY REALLY COOL! except for the part about the dog.
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| Posted by: Zora Girl | 02-02-2007 14:24 [Email,Website] |
That was one of the coolest stories I've ever read! But as an opinion I wouldn't have killed the puppy but the story was still SUPERCOOL!
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| Posted by: TRML | 01-29-2007 12:01 [Email,Website] |
Very nice story well written in almost every concept.
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| Posted by: Brandon | 01-26-2007 19:11 [Email,Website] |
awesome story it was great
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| Posted by: kelsey | 01-16-2007 16:08 [Email,Website] |
wow that story was soo awsome!!usualy i'd get boerd reading, but that was the most intersting story i've ever read. ur a really good writter. i hope u'll write more stories!^_^
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| Posted by: Kara | 01-04-2007 20:05 [Email,Website] |
Great idea and plot for a story. Could have used more detail. I thought it was good, but I was looking for more of a description on how things looked and characters reacted. There was so much potential to use. Keep up the writing.
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| Posted by: LoZFan1989 | 11-25-2006 07:44 [Email,Website] |
That was a really nice story! You are a good writer. I hope you will keep on writing Zelda stories and posting them on this site.
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| Posted by: Goddess of water | 11-11-2006 11:55 [Email,Website] |
That was the best story I'v ever read.
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| Posted by: Majora | 10-27-2006 17:33 [Email,Website] |
Lysia, you are HOT!!! And so is the story?
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| Posted by: Leo-chan | 10-08-2006 12:11 [Email,Website] |
Why did u have to make link stay he should have stayed in the future it makes me so sad... I know make a sequel plz!!!! =D
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| Posted by: Master Chief 00234 | 09-30-2006 17:18 [Email,Website] |
The story could have used some more Zelda, but other wise it was pretty good.
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| Posted by: Faerydust | 09-24-2006 18:11 [Email,Website] |
I only read the first chapter, and it seems like a really cool idea, but I do think you should show more of the story and tell less. So instead of telling the reader they had tea, write about what what happen, what they said, what they thought. It gives the reader a better connection to the character, as it creates more time for characterization, and make the reader more emotionally invested in the plot. The diction and syntax was fine and you're quite good at dialouge. I defitely(sp?) think that you've got a good start and with some work you could be a good writer. (not saying your bad now, just unpolished.) And you should take in mind that I only read the first chapter so this review is only from the feeling I got about your writing, not a large sample of it.
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| Posted by: monkey | 08-21-2006 17:19 [Email,Website] |
that was a good story. i like how u based it on the orcarina of time. i loved it. except it was long, but i dont really care.5-star
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| Posted by: Mike Jones | 08-20-2006 02:01 [Email,Website] |
I enjoyed this story very much. I had a rough time leaving the computer for a drink of water until I finished the story. While there where a few typos and the overuse of the word "however", this is very minor and doesn't matter. The only thing I'd change about it is the portion where the Mido yells at link for blabbing where the forest is, because everyone already knows, but don't go to the forest because they'll turn into stalfos.
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| Posted by: Link-The 5th Sword wielder | 08-19-2006 23:40 [Email,Website] |
WOW.that was really good.cool twist to the usual olden times set.
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| Posted by: A Zelda fan | 07-24-2006 21:55 [Email,Website] |
Ooh! I saw that! I saw on www.Flashplayer.com. It was SO funny! They also have this clip of Zelda called "The real Legend" And Holy cow pie that was funny! You go to check it out! copy and paste this in the web address: http://www.flashplayer.com/animation/thereallegend.html
That is REALLY funny! Theres also "The real legend 2" But you'll hafta find that on your own (It's on the same website) I'm SO tired so I'm going to bed!
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| Posted by: | 07-22-2006 13:36 [Email,Website] |
cut the comment below and paste it in the web address to watch a funny link movie
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| Posted by: | 07-22-2006 13:34 [Email,Website] |
http://bahb.net/index.php?page=viewflash&id=115
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| Posted by: Elf Princess*** | 06-30-2006 21:55 [Email,Website] |
wow that was cool...but wait! what happened to Julia? You should write a story about her going back in time!!
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| Posted by: Acure( I am changing the gay name). | 06-27-2006 16:48 [Email,Website] |
That was so cool it was amazing but it had a lame ending you did'nt explain much. P.S. anyone is Acure a gay name
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| Posted by: Acure( I am changing the gay name). | 06-27-2006 16:48 [Email,Website] |
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| Posted by: Olivia | 06-09-2006 09:06 [Email,Website] |
I loved it! It was sooooo awesome! I could see it all! 5 out of 5!!!
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| Posted by: Phat Kat | 06-07-2006 21:06 [Email,Website] |
I love how you mixed up the different times with the same characters, and also how Link and Ganondorf interacted with their new futuristic environments! ^.^ One of your best stories by far.
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| Posted by: Me | 06-03-2006 12:46 [Email,Website] |
best story so far, would have been beter if future Zelda turned out to be the bad guys and JOINED Gannondorf willingly, but still good story, he he I wrote the word Butt
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| Posted by: Little Link | 05-31-2006 18:52 [Email,Website] |
Nice future idea.(I had the same and am writing a story on it myself) Great plot. Just add a little more if possible.
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| Posted by: Malignant Decadence | 05-27-2006 16:51 [Email,Website] |
I love this story! It was written awsomely, and from a unique perspective. Good work!
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| Posted by: Leaf the pokemon champion | 05-20-2006 16:31 [Email,Website] |
Hey Lysia if you see this you have to remember to post the new chapters for the other fanfics your the webmaster remember that.
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| Posted by: q | 05-20-2006 13:21 [Email,Website] |
nice story! (to me it's a little short, but that's just me)
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| Posted by: Knil-I returned | 05-19-2006 07:37 [Email,Website] |
WoW thats the best story ever, Man i wish that wa sreal i felt like i was actuly in the story. YOU GO GIRL. ^.^
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| Posted by: Dac | 05-19-2006 07:36 [Email,Website] |
Wow that was,that wa sWoW
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| Posted by: Elf Princess*** | 05-12-2006 18:19 [Email,Website] |
Wow. Wait a second...OK! Link says he loved the storyline, but he wanted it to be more violent. I disagree. LOVED it!
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| Posted by: Master sword wielder | 05-12-2006 12:00 [Email,Website] |
This is a GREAT story! I really love the storyline. keep on writhing!
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| Posted by: LinKS bIGGEr FaN | 05-02-2006 14:49 [Email,Website] |
GGO;]
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| Posted by: LinKS bIGGEr FaN | 05-02-2006 14:49 [Email,Website] |
GGO;]
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| Posted by: LinKS bIGGEr FaN | 05-02-2006 14:49 [Email,Website] |
GGO;]
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| Posted by: LinKS bIGGEr FaN | 05-02-2006 14:49 [Email,Website] |
GGO;]
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| Posted by: LinKS bIGGEr FaN | 05-02-2006 14:49 [Email,Website] |
GGO;]
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| Posted by: LinKS bIGGEr FaN | 05-02-2006 14:49 [Email,Website] |
GGO;]
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| Posted by: LinKS bIGGEr FaN | 05-02-2006 14:49 [Email,Website] |
GGO;]
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| Posted by: LinKS bIGGEr FaN | 05-02-2006 14:49 [Email,Website] |
GGO;]
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| Posted by: LinKS bIGGEr FaN | 05-02-2006 14:49 [Email,Website] |
GGO;]
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| Posted by: Link's Biggest fan | 04-28-2006 14:03 [Email,Website] |
It was absolutely positively awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should right books!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: Jeny | 04-26-2006 16:12 [Email,Website] |
Wow! This is a great story. You really did a great job writing this story. I am very impressed!
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| Posted by: metalfighterriku | 04-14-2006 01:27 [Email,Website] |
no!no!NO! It can't end like that! at put an aftermath on the aftermath! I want to know what happened to Mac Zelda and Julia! Will Julia ever find out she's a decendent of the hero?
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| Posted by: Spiritual Sheikah | 04-05-2006 14:32 [Email,Website] |
THE BEST FREAKIN STORY HERE!!!!!!!!! WAYYYYY BETTER THAN MINE!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: Lysia | 03-29-2006 18:54 [Email,Website] |
Just testing the review page on the new server to make sure everything transferred okay.
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| Posted by: Lysia | 03-29-2006 18:54 [Email,Website] |
Just testing the review page on the new server to make sure everything transferred okay.
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| Posted by: Lysia | 03-29-2006 18:54 [Email,Website] |
Just testing the review page on the new server to make sure everything transferred okay.
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| Posted by: Lysia | 03-29-2006 18:54 [Email,Website] |
Just testing the review page on the new server to make sure everything transferred okay.
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| Posted by: Ninja Link Death From Above | 02-01-2006 10:56 [Email,Website] |
I think this story was well writen in the areas of humor and description of charactors and events. One thing troubles me though. Shouldn't Zelda, as the seventh sage, have magic anyway?
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| Posted by: Ninja Link Death From Above | 02-01-2006 10:55 [Email,Website] |
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| Posted by: ??? | 01-22-2006 14:09 [Email,Website] |
It was a great story! But what happened to Julia?
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| Posted by: Kokiri | 01-16-2006 14:20 [Email,Website] |
Good job! I liked it a lot.
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| Posted by: Nabooru | 01-16-2006 14:20 [Email,Website] |
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| Posted by: knil (thats link backwards) | 12-26-2005 18:07 [Email,Website] |
that was the best story ive read in a lopng time.
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| Posted by: x/x2 | 12-26-2005 17:30 [Email,Website] |
i love the cross over story idea.
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| Posted by: Janine | 11-11-2005 14:57 [Email,Website] |
oh Sheesh! That was cool, but it's hard to imagin Link joy riding!
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| Posted by: chetsang31 | 11-09-2005 14:36 [Email,Website] |
qik storie the charachters are just right you sould go prof
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| Posted by: Zora Me | 09-25-2005 04:45 [Email,Website] |
this is a great story good work
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| Posted by: Link T H O T | 07-08-2005 15:15 [Email,Website] |
where has navi gone
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| Posted by: Link T H O T | 07-08-2005 15:08 [Email,Website] |
the story is great but what happened to Julia not to mention Paul[I hate paul hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha]
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| Posted by: Link The Hero Of Time | 07-08-2005 15:03 [Email,Website] |
It was great but you don't suppose you could make the word "decapitated" into "executed"don't you?
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| Posted by: Link The Hero of Time | 07-08-2005 15:02 [Email,Website] |
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| Posted by: MaRk | 07-07-2005 08:26 [Email,Website] |
Not bad but whatever happend to the master sword and i think there should have been a fight between link and gannondorf
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| Posted by: non- Link 7 | 06-06-2005 14:24 [Email,Website] |
Bad Bad Bad BAD BAD BAD BAD!
That was so BAD!!!!! it put me in a coma (i can't breath !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: Kameron Brown | 06-01-2005 11:49 [Email,Website] |
I liked this story very well, but the ending could've been better... :)
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| Posted by: 7 jennifer. r | 05-31-2005 19:30 [Email,Website] |
Very Very VERY awesome story
I sware you should keep writing
WEBMASTER!
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| Posted by: 7 jennifer. r | 05-31-2005 19:30 [Email,Website] |
Very Very VERY awesome story
I sware you should keep writing
WEBMASTER!
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| Posted by: Baldur | 05-29-2005 00:52 [Email,Website] |
WoW that was great i love it PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: An Arse | 05-11-2005 18:54 [Email,Website] |
Wow that sucked my second cousin's dick.It was that bad.
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| Posted by: Cam | 05-05-2005 06:08 [Email,Website] |
It was really great. They're even better than mine^_^.
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| Posted by: 7 jennifer. r | 04-25-2005 18:20 [Email,Website] |
this was the best story i ever seen
keep writing your a pro
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| Posted by: Shane Deyo | 04-20-2005 05:59 [Email,Website] |
its awsome i even printed off a copy keep writing
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| Posted by: Shane Deyo | 04-18-2005 09:39 [Email,Website] |
its great
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| Posted by: Sara Beanie | 02-13-2005 11:17 [Email,Website] |
I think it was sweet.*smiles cutely*:)
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| Posted by: Ademi Princess | 02-13-2005 11:15 [Email,Website] |
a test?!*turns white*I-I DIDNT HEAR ABOUT A TEST!!!IM SCARED CUZ I FLUNK TESTS!!!!IT WAS AWESOME!!!DID I PASS??HUH??DID I???
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| Posted by: Ryuwind23 | 02-11-2005 20:59 [Email,Website] |
Although it's not your usual Zelda tale, it's still very good story. :)
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| Posted by: linkmaste | 12-17-2004 16:11 [Email,Website] |
that was ur very first wasent it? well i hoped for a huge battle and gannondorf would turn into gannon at the end and the princess zedla would come with the sages but good for a nonviolent thing and one more thing... DONT HAVE DOGS KILLED!!! there cute :)
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| Posted by: Navi24 | 11-19-2004 15:44 [Email,Website] |
nice
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| Posted by: Links_twin | 10-01-2004 22:22 [Email,Website] |
I like your story you shuold right one about Julia's adventures like she has to vs Ganon's descendent who's 4 times stronger or something like that.
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| Posted by: Links_twin | 09-30-2004 01:30 [Email,Website] |
I like it so far its cool
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| Posted by: Dark Moogle | 09-25-2004 00:49 [Email,Website] |
good story. I liked it.
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| Posted by: Bobby | 09-05-2004 21:38 [Email,Website] |
This story is really great, but in the end, what did Julia have to do with anything? I mean she was in jail, so she couldn't do anything.
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| Posted by: Torgal | 09-03-2004 21:45 [Email,Website] |
Excellent story! I will be looking forward to your next writings^^
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| Posted by: fag | 08-23-2004 17:20 [Email,Website] |
i can write something better
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| Posted by: fag | 08-23-2004 17:20 [Email,Website] |
i can write something better
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| Posted by: Maria a.k.a | 08-09-2004 01:10 [Email,Website] |
Nice work. Good job. This was a very interesting story. I loved it!
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| Posted by: Red Mage Moogle | 08-08-2004 19:01 [Email,Website] |
Sweeeeet.
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| Posted by: sage of all | 06-22-2004 19:36 [Email,Website] |
not bad i think you did good. :)
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| Posted by: Lysia | 05-29-2004 00:26 [Email,Website] |
This is a test.
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