| Posted by: blenderbeer | 10-27-2008 15:25 [Email,Website] |
I only read this prologue and it was OK. The best part is definetely these reviews. These arguments about Link's love life are comedy gold.
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| Posted by: Kilala | 06-18-2008 18:28 [Email,Website] |
AWSOMENESS!!! I love this story cuz Zelda is kinda a slut...Malon is better than her...anyone is really. i want to c if they go further, write more!!!
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| Posted by: amy | 03-13-2008 06:54 [Email,Website] |
i dont think Malon and link should hook up, I dont know you but i think you can do better
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| Posted by: hyrulesaver#1 | 03-07-2008 18:28 [Email,Website] |
wonderful just wonderful
I am a sucker for anything romantic
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| Posted by: wannablink | 01-06-2008 19:44 [Email,Website] |
very nice but i always wanted link to hook up with zelda. very good though
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| Posted by: zelda fans. Fallon n Amber | 09-02-2007 17:51 [Email,Website] |
amber liked it but me fallon loved it. I thought it was the best story ever
fallon age 8 and amber 13
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| Posted by: Summer | 07-17-2007 02:45 [Email,Website] |
Sorry, I didn't like it, although I have never liked storys where they make characters from the legend of zelda do those things. You should try a different approach. But it was good....until the part with Malon.
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| Posted by: oni link | 07-10-2007 11:52 [Email,Website] |
I like the concept but I think it could have been a lot longer but other than that pritty good:)
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| Posted by: the hero of time | 02-28-2007 07:45 [Email,Website] |
next fanfiction you make, (that's completely different)you should have the romance with Saria. but that's just me do it however you want!:D
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| Posted by: the hero of time | 02-26-2007 18:33 [Email,Website] |
c'mon, navi's not so bad!
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| Posted by: the hero of time | 02-26-2007 18:26 [Email,Website] |
i really liked it. i cant wait till the other prologue is finshed!
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| Posted by: Aftershock of Hyrule | 02-11-2007 15:12 [Email,Website] |
Just to clear things up with everybody, the other chapters of this story are backed up on Lysia's computer and could take a while to be put on here. Further more, you may not be seeing an update for a while. However, if you do wish to see more of my fan fiction, visit http://www.fanfiction.net/~synphonyinxmajor
I appreciate the support!
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| Posted by: Maria Stars | 12-24-2006 21:11 [Email,Website] |
I really liked your story! ^_^ Very well done! I rather like Malon, so I approve of the matching! ^_^
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| Posted by: Aftershock of Hyrule | 12-17-2006 09:57 [Email,Website] |
To all of you people who have flamed me or are using my comments as arguements, dont. I'd like to see something encouraging instead. And thank you to everyone who has left encouraging comments. I appreciate it all!
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| Posted by: Links_legend | 12-09-2006 19:49 [Email,Website] |
Heh, as much of Zelda fan I am, and I REALLY am!!! Its got a good mood to it and good romance Except I would have made the romance with Zelda.
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| Posted by: Elisa | 10-26-2006 16:45 [Email,Website] |
It was ok, but why Malon? don't get me wrong you'r a great writer, but I think it should have been Zelda
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| Posted by: jordon | 09-20-2006 16:09 [Email,Website] |
not bad, write the rest then ill decide
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| Posted by: liquid soul 2 | 09-09-2006 22:08 [Email,Website] |
Wern't we going to burn her? *mischevious smile*
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| Posted by: Seventh Sage | 09-08-2006 17:12 [Email,Website] |
well... i lik everyone in the M.O.T.S. group and ur one of them but... NAVI ISN'T! MWHAHAHAHAHA
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| Posted by: liquid soul 2 | 09-07-2006 21:17 [Email,Website] |
Thanks for having my back S.S! I officially hate Navi or anyone remotly CLOSE to her at all. Stupid fairy.
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| Posted by: Seventh Sage | 09-05-2006 02:26 [Email,Website] |
now that was a nice comeback 4 real Liquid Soul 2. sorry Navi but people lik u can really piss me off, so u cam go and do what my freind Liquid Soul said...
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| Posted by: liquid soul 2 | 09-04-2006 09:50 [Email,Website] |
Loser-a-leak? Nice comeback. Go F**K yourself.
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| Posted by: Biggest Link fan | 09-03-2006 13:39 [Email,Website] |
OK, you did make one new fan. I liked the way you used sort of a dark way to describe a reunion. Also I liked your adjectives. Hopefully you will get the chance to carry on with your writing soon. Good Start!
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| Posted by: Navi | 08-27-2006 10:16 [Email,Website] |
Bite me. Loser-a-leak.
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| Posted by: sheik-a-leak | 08-25-2006 13:56 [Email,Website] |
Anything-I repeat ANYTHING is better than Navi. Holy crap, who would want to be an annoying jackass-fairy? As for my screenname, havn't you ever herd of the song "Freak-a-leak" by the Ying Yang Twins? Obviously not...Thats the whole point of my screenname, IF you had a sense of humor....whicj you don't. My screenname is COOL, so go POO on yourself, dipstick!
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| Posted by: Navi | 08-23-2006 18:33 [Email,Website] |
Well, sheik-a-leak, you're screenname ain't too good either. So, POO! Yeah, I'll say it again. POO!
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| Posted by: SlimmyG | 08-23-2006 09:48 [Email,Website] |
woah, this was good. now i wanna read the whole story...
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| Posted by: Link-The 5th Sword wielder | 08-21-2006 23:43 [Email,Website] |
that was really good for your prologue.it draws the reader in.GREAT JOB!
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| Posted by: Majora | 08-20-2006 14:46 [Email,Website] |
It's good. You have an excellent style. I'm writing my own book which is actually kind of like yours. Maybe I'll post it...
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| Posted by: sheik-a-leak | 08-15-2006 16:04 [Email,Website] |
Will you cut it out with the "Poo" crap?! You're getting annoying...which doesn't suprise me considering your screename. come on, anyone can do better than Navi...even annoying people like yourself who like to say "Poo".
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| Posted by: Navi | 08-14-2006 18:44 [Email,Website] |
Farty Fart Fart... Oh, were you talking to me? I died of boredom, so I woud rather fart and then light a match instead of reading this crap again. So, poo.
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| Posted by: Navi | 08-14-2006 18:16 [Email,Website] |
I want to squeeze Malon's little neck until her head pops off, but first, I have to grow arms...
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| Posted by: Seventh Sage | 08-01-2006 17:26 [Email,Website] |
I FOUND THE CRIMINAL...who used my name 2 right the note that said this story was good...my friend...she likes malon...i slapped her cause i was so pissed that she used my name 2 right the thing about this story before
P.S. EVERYONE WHO WORKS AT LON LON RANCH SUCKS!!
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| Posted by: liquid soul 2 | 08-01-2006 14:58 [Email,Website] |
well, its ok because I'm a pirate!!! Arr matey! Pirates don't like farm girls named Malon!
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| Posted by: Leaf the pokemon champion(I'm a girl) | 08-01-2006 09:35 [Email,Website] |
Navi I think Link likes everyone (except Ganondorf) as friends.
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| Posted by: Navi | 07-31-2006 15:46 [Email,Website] |
SamanthaMaeee, dude. Malon and Link barely say 10 sentences to each other. WHAT ROMANCE? Malon likes Link, but Link likes, well, nobody!
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| Posted by: Sarah | 07-30-2006 09:06 [Email,Website] |
WHO THE HELL USED MY NAME SEVENTH SAGE...I USE THAT NAME, I HATE MALON...SHE SUCKS...WHOEVER THE FUCK USED MY FUCKING NAME 2 WRIGHT THAT NOTE IS GONNA FUCKIN DIE AND ROTE IN HELL ALONG WIT MALONAND EVERYONE WHO FUCKIN WORKS AT LON LON RANCNH!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: Some Person | 07-29-2006 15:04 [Email,Website] |
If you want Malon to die write a fan fic about Malon's death Navi.
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| Posted by: Navi | 07-24-2006 16:51 [Email,Website] |
I hate Malon. Malon should die a painful death and I shall watch and enjoy the fearsome pain she endures.
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| Posted by: Oni Sheik | 07-20-2006 06:53 [Email,Website] |
CONGRATS!! You have earned another excited fan! PEASE KEEP WRITING!!
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| Posted by: lonelyman | 07-19-2006 14:18 [Email,Website] |
dont take this bad but this history is so boring and is just.... i dont even have the words to say it. My response is very simply i dont like it.
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| Posted by: pathetic | 07-16-2006 10:52 [Email,Website] |
yawn
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| Posted by: pathetic | 07-16-2006 10:52 [Email,Website] |
yawn
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| Posted by: SamanthaMaeee | 07-15-2006 22:51 [Email,Website] |
I really liked this story. I've always noticed some romance between Link and Malon myself, at least it's pretty clear Malon likes Link more. But either way, great sotry :)
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| Posted by: Seventh Sage | 07-15-2006 12:41 [Email,Website] |
WOW i loved it, it had alot of big words that were to big for my stupid head brain. i guess that why my friends call me stupid head. Anyways nice story, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!
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| Posted by: Seventh Sage | 07-15-2006 12:41 [Email,Website] |
WOW i loved it, it had alot of big words that were to big for my stupid head brain. i guess that wht my friends call me stupid head. Anyways nice story, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!
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| Posted by: liquid soul | 07-15-2006 08:49 [Email,Website] |
It was fine. But MALON?! Anyone can do better than Malon.
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| Posted by: Zelinxia | 07-14-2006 13:45 [Email,Website] |
Well done for your first fanfiction so far. It actually makes sense reading through it.
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| Posted by: Leaf the pokemon champion | 07-13-2006 16:43 [Email,Website] |
At least it's a little better than,"Everything a country girl could ask for".
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| Posted by: Ben LeClair | 07-12-2006 18:46 [Email,Website] |
Very nice. I'm a sucker for anthing even remotely romantic, so I'm gonna keep reading this as it goes on.
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| Posted by: Ganonslayer | 07-12-2006 14:30 [Email,Website] |
You wrote a great prologue great start I was able to fallow it all the way through.
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