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In the land of Hyrule, Roc was flying to his cabin from Lake Hylia. He didn't have his cape on. Then he saw Malon on a horse with lots of cargo.
      "Wonder what she's up to." said Roc. Roc flew down to Malon. "Hey! I forgot to thank you for the cape!"
      "You're welcome! How'd you turn into that bird guy?" asked Malon.
      "When I have my cape on and I'm mad, I turn more like my father." answered Roc.
      "Who's your father?' asked Malon.
      "Keapora Gaebora" answered Roc.
      "I've been thinking, Shadow said that you and me were brother and sister. But my father is Talon and your father is that big owl guy."
      "It's a long story: When we were little kids about eight years ago, Talon adopted me 'cause I had no parents. So that's how we're brother and sister. But a year after that, I was eleven and you were ten, that forest kid Link came and you taught him Epona's song. When he left, K.G. came to me and told me that I was really his son. So I left to live with him in Holodrum. I guess I forgot to say goodbye." After hearing the story, Malon had tears in her eyes.

      "It has been a long time, but why did you want it to be a secret? Dad and me moved to Holodrum to look for you. And when Dad came down from Cucco Mountain, he said you weren't anywhere so we moved back to Hyrule." said Malon. While Roc and Malon were talking, Roc hit his head on the castle wall.
      "Opps, I forgot to tell you, I'm delivering milk to the castle because Dad'll fall asleep again." said Malon.
      "You should have told me sooner." said Roc with a bump on his head.

     Later across Hyrule, a woman with a robe covering her whole body was walking down Zora's River. "I wonder if I'll ever fit in." said the woman quietly. Then an Octorok came out of the water. This Octorok isn't a normal Octorok, it had black skin, teeth inside its mouth, and it had red eyes.
      "You're coming with me!" said the black Octorok.
      "Yeah right!" said the woman. She took out a blue boomerang and threw it at the Octorok. But it broke.
      "I'm as hard as blade steel! So are you coming with me?" said the Octorok.
      "I don't think she has to!" Roc flew down and slashed at the Octorok.
      "We'll meet again!" the Octorok went back in the water.

      "Why was that Octorok after you?" asked Roc.
      "This is why..." said the woman. She threw off her robe. She had a fish-like tail, another tail coming out of her head, beautiful long blue hair, a blue shirt, blue pants, blue sandals and the Zora's Sapphire (on a necklace) around her neck. "I'm the princess of the Zoras: Princess Ryca."
      "I thought Princess Ruto was the princess of the Zoras," said Roc. "And, you don't look like a Zora except for the head tail and your tail."
      "I'm half Zora, my mother is Princess Ruto and my father is Rycuko a human from Termina." said Ryca.
      "I've never heard of a Half Zora," said Roc.
      "Don't ask," said Ryca as she jumped into the river and swam off.

     Later, Roc got to his cabin and laid down on the couch. "So, what's new?" asked Shadow.
      "Nothing special..." said Roc. Then there was a knock on Roc's door.
      "Yeah?" It was Sheik.
      "I see you're back, Roc," said Sheik.
      "1, who are you, 2, how do you know my name and 3, how do you know where I live?" asked Roc.
      "I'm Sheik, one of the last Sheikahs, a friend told me and another friend told me." answered Sheik. Roc had a glare in his eyes.

     Later the next day, Roc was flying over Zora's River to find Ryca. Then a red rock hit Roc and knocked him out. Roc found himself tied up under water. He saw that weights were on his feet so he couldn't go to the surface.
      "What am I going to do!" Roc asked himself. Before he knew it, he ran out of breath.

      "Hah Hah!! My master would have been pleased to see his slayer being killed!" said the black Octorok looking at him from above the tank. They were in a temple in the Shadow world. But then, Roc jumped out of the water. Roc was at his super form again.
      "I knew it was a good idea to keep my cape in my pocket!" He saw Ryca in another tank with weights on her feet. "Oh come on! She's a Zora! Ever heard of gills!?!"
      "You're right, that's why I taped her gills closed!" said the Black Octorok. Roc toke out his Sky sword but the Octorok shot a rock at it and broke the blade in half.
      "Will this get any worse!?!" said Roc.
      "Sure!" the Black Octorok turned into a minion of Zythol, with a purple robe, purple hair, black pants, black shirt and black boots. "I'm Zynzite, Zythol's #1 minion!"
      "I'm going to kill you every quickly so I won't get madder!" Then Roc threw the hilt part at Zynzite, then swam down to Ryca and cut her free with the blade part.
      "Thanks" said Ryca.
      "Don't thank me yet!" Roc did a back flip behind Zynzite, but he shot Roc with a darkness ball.

      "Looks Like You could use some back-up!" A knife stabbed Zynzite in the hand. "Crap, I was aiming for his head!" It was Sheik.
      "You little!" Zynzite toke the knife out of his hand and went to strike Roc. Then a cold breeze sent shivers down everyone's spines. Roc's eyes glowed a dark blue. Roc's talons got sharper and his feathers were as sharp as razors.
      "Tell your master I said Hi!" Roc jumped up and stabbed Zynzite through his gut. Sheik punched Roc so hard, he fell unconscious.

     Roc awoke in Hyrule Castle's Hospital Wing. Shadow came up to him and punched him.
      "What'd you do that for!" said Roc. Shadow put Roc's tunic on the table with his cape and belt.
      "Glad to came to, Roc." Shadow looked up at the window. "You know, Sometimes I think, you don't even know who you are." Shadow looked at Roc again. "You're unique, that's what makes you different." Shadow walks toward the door. "I'm not just your alter ego, I'm your Yang (evil)! And partner, so next time you go on a mission..." Shadow puts a smile on his face. "...I'm not letting you take all the fun!" Roc put on his tunic and belt then went out the door.
      "Who am I?"

To be continued...