by CJ » Thu Aug 05, 2010 1:48 am
OoC: I must say, I think you're doing REALLY good LL17! I've only noticed a vary few places were you may have forgotten a space, or some kind of punctuation. but then again, meny, meny of us forget to add . and , in places a good bit of the time. and I think I may be using the , either to much in my sentences, or may be using them the wrong way. I don't know, may be I'm not and am really using them just like they're ment to be used. but I tend to be super self critical, and I know my spelling's not that great either, but that's just how I am. and now I feel like I'm starting to rant here. but again I must say, you're doing vary well. hope that helps!
James was walking back twords the edge of the woods and stoped to lean up against the tree. "man, I've been walking around for about how long now? a good 8 hours or so? I really should give my feet a break." he said as he sat down against the tree. then, something caught the corner of his eye. he turned his head to see a light off in the distance. by the size he could tell it was quite far off, yet it was still quite bright. it was obviously not natural, and possibly the sign of some vary strong magick or something. "looks like that brake will just have to wait alittle longer." James said as he got up and ran in the direction of the light.
ZELDA RULES
^.^ own all ZELDA games except: the CDIs and the game and watch.
ZELDA GAMES BEATEN: all but Zelda 1, Zelda 2, and a Link to the Past on the Super-Nes. (beat the one for gameboy.)

Favorite series are Zelda #1, Final Fantasy, and Kingdom Hearts! (can't decide favorite between the last 2.)
I CHALLENGE ANY AND ALL OTHER ZELDA FANS WHO THINK THEIR BIGGER FANS THEN I! O.o!